Please tell me what you think of my essay based on a lyrical interpretation?

If I may use a pun, the language, especially the adjectives, may be a bit too "flowery" at times. the content is good and reflects your own interpretation which is important as this is a very subjective piece.I would make one specific change if I were your editor. The page "a global artist globally renowned" seems a bit stilted I would change it to "a globally, renowned solo artist". It conveys the same meaning but flows better. Good luck, ping grade.